Maal-Maal

I'm amazed you still go on this

We see if I have understood… advices from ME well? They are flattered indeed! I frankly do not feel a person in a position to giving advice But I could perhaps suggest to follow a mockup while designs, at least for the face initially….I have noticed that you make a crushed face the witness and the eyes too much seem large plates and for this. I know that it is a typical characteristic of the style manga but you can try to balance it! Before beginning to design you make an oval for the head that is divisible in three equal parts. These " sections" they do not have to be neither large neither too much too much small ^^ Then you make to pass a line in means, that it will serve from symmetrical axis. You will be able to move as you want in order to obtain the positions of the ace that you want! Now, the two lines that you have obtained dividend the ace in three parts, are the indication for eyes and mouth the nose is found over the mouth, and will decide you according to your style which
*is better to make it. Remembered but that it must always do the symmetrical axis in the event did not find facade. Frontally it will be carefullied lay down on the line and of it we will see only the tip ^^ Naturally as to reproduce the elemtni of the ace it is a your choice. Obviously they must be disposed in symmetrical way and the construction really serves to this! You will see that it will help you very, if already you make it suggestion to try itself to us and to try again and to apply the rule to us to photo of real persons, in order to practice with reliable references ^^ it is always a synthetized truth, in fact. For the body, famous problems all' anatomy and to the way in which the garments are folded. The garment joins to the part of the body supports that it. If as an example you have a t shirt wide, and you stretch the arm you will notice that the woven one joins to the high and falls back on that lowland! In any case for the body not c' it is a predefined mockup and I do not know like help because also fatico to find my way! You can use reference photo and always try directly to instinct to divide the body in sections there.

Anyway go here:[link]
is in Italian but the pictures you see everything! ^ ^
Good design :*
* watch *
Ps: Sorry for my english ( google translate -__-''' XD)

hey thx for the watch, its good to see a fellow manga artist
also jsut a note, If you want to improve i recommend you practice anatomy -> [link] you can practice sketching anatomy here, great site, you got a cool style going for you already
just suggesting may you draw in peace